Day 15 - another Draft of 'Monty Biggs'

Following some helpful comments regarding script formating and dialogue comments I decided to do another draft of 'Monty Biggs' - download here. I also changed the Child in the crowd to a baseball batboy (well batgirl to be exact). I did this for a few reasons, one was it was easier to get the child closer to Monty and the other was I had a great thought about the name of this Batboy which worked on many levels (you will have to read script to find out)

Kyle did another drawing for me of the Pitcher - AWESOME !! Kyle have a real knack of taking descriptions and making them reality.