Day 8 - Script 'Monty Biggs'

As you all know I want to become a director so I have started to write new scripts and revisit old ones. Well I have decided to release my script of 'Monty Biggs' for everyone to read. Please note that it still needs a lot of work (formating), but I am happy to let people read it now so I can get some feedback of how to improve what I have done. It's a 3D animated short movie that I would like to eventually make, which should run for around 10min in length. For this 'Monty Biggs' script I am going to take it all the way to a completed Animatic (2D) , storyboarded with camera moves, voice talents, and soundFX. This Animatic should show my talents as a Director without the massive task of actually producing the movie. I am choosing to do this as I would prefer to have 3-4 different scripts turned into animatics rather then 1 completed short. Really it's all about story telling for me now rather then showing a nice render. Don't get me wrong I would love to make the movie but for my journey I think I will learn more just doing animatics (hey my reel is already full of nice renders, and an animated short)

Link to script :)